As you said, this is no masterpiece, but it's looking okay!
First few things I noticed that were slightly 'off' were:
-the bite marks on the lower lip. The lines don't create a look of stretch-i-ness.
-the red lines on the eyes are crude
- ear looks out of place. Keep to the same style of drawing in one picture.
that's all I could pick up on. Looking good so far. Just needs a touch up and perhaps more depth. Add a perception line, make the background more chaotic, all that good stuff ;D
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Thanks for all those tips and recommending me. I am going to make the background more chaotic next time, and I'm all that other stuff. :D
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