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Nice tune you have here. You need to work on your transitions and arrangement (building tension and release), the track feels like it has the same level of energy at all times. Not great when you want emphasis on the chorus perhaps. It's like writing a story. Try out filter sweeps, riser/downlift SFX and reverb/delay automation.
You should work on your mix too. Cut frequencies you don't really need and make sure the master peaks no higher than 0db. Then during the master stage you can increase the gain on your master to make it louder.
Nice tune, but still room for improvement. Good job!
Thank you so much. Now I know what I can improve on. It really helped :)
m8 dis sum gud ambient shit ay rbuv
i can tell u limit ur master, achtroo profeshunl for newground audio portal
keepi t up
ps want to collab? i have massive and nexus on fl studios 9 ;)
thank you for the spam!@! i f i never see it, i would had not come to hear this song and is smazing!!!!!!!!!!!1
I don't spam. I'm a human not a robot. But sure no problem.
As you said, this is no masterpiece, but it's looking okay!
First few things I noticed that were slightly 'off' were:
-the bite marks on the lower lip. The lines don't create a look of stretch-i-ness.
-the red lines on the eyes are crude
- ear looks out of place. Keep to the same style of drawing in one picture.
that's all I could pick up on. Looking good so far. Just needs a touch up and perhaps more depth. Add a perception line, make the background more chaotic, all that good stuff ;D
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Thanks for all those tips and recommending me. I am going to make the background more chaotic next time, and I'm all that other stuff. :D
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